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The Veil

Eons and eons away…

There is a galaxy similar to our Milky Way galaxy, but it is five times as momentous. Ten times less toxic. Filled with natural resources. Filled with rare, pure energy sources. This galaxy is called Vankmax. Unlike our universe, it was always known to be technologically and physically advanced.

With the help of many genius scientists. Vankmax tech ranges from flying vehicles to medically engineered super humans. Even time warping machines. This universe had everything anyone could ever want. Peace, love, joy, art. Best of all, this inexplicable magical unity.

But somewhere along this amazing universe, there was one little tiny planet. All students, workers, and tourists from each planet would never notice the minute planet. They all dismissed it because it didn’t look habitable. As they would travel, trade, and communicate with each other, due to how secluded and scaled-down it was. Little did they know. There was a township there, surviving off of the planet’s nutrients and animals. The township was created many decades earlier. When a low rate commercial airplane crash-landed there.

Upon entering the planet. There is a thick black veil as the atmosphere, that hides this planet from any other planet. From inside the planet, the black veil made it nearly impossible to make it out into space. With all communications broken, all the remaining survivors from the crash landing struggled. To survive on this unknown, forsaken planet. Although the adjustments were crucial and some survivors felt well-equipped. Since they survived the plane crash.

They were soon proven wrong. From the weird variation of seasons, elements, and time on this unknown planet. But a few of the plane crash survivors died. Trying to adapt to the unpredictable planet alone. A majority of the survivors decided to create a union. A township, in hopes of efficiently surviving on this planet in the long road.

Nowadays. The township is growing from other planes and ships crashing into this little planet. The townspeople know how difficult it is to be on your own. So, they immediately rush to crash sites to help survivors. Progressing from nothing. A small group of survivors. Slowly, they created a lively agricultural and mining town. Constantly learning and evolving. Figuring out about health and old tech pieces, that could be a transmission to the rest of the universe. In order for the town to run accordingly. Every single person has to do their respected agricultural, minor, researcher and medical job accordingly. But new survivors and kids under 7 all had the same job. Which was to work the fields due to their lack of knowledge of the planet.

One day, a young agricultural farmer boy kept hearing a faint voice call out his name. Since every survivor wasn’t an expert, they had to improvise to what they knew how to do. So, as they first began to create this township. They had to improvise and worked every field. No matter where the fruit or vegetables are, they appear like three baseball fields all in one. As the day passed, the boy kept hearing the voice. And he said enough, so he decided to follow the voice that had been pestering him.

While he was trying to locate this voice, he came across something he was very fond of, which was history. Although he had already attended his class for the day. He snuck his way into a history course set for kids six years older than him. Two hours had passed since the little farm boy wandered off. Other agricultural farmworkers noticed he was gone. So the two agricultural farmworkers close to the boy began to look for him in a small area near where all three work.

Not able to find him, they began to get concerned. They got all the other agricultural workers involved in the search. Trying their hardest to find him. On or around the farm. School. Boars den. Night begins to creep. Some people are beginning to think he might be dead. They’re not willing to give up. They extended the search party and area. With the help of many researchers who had experience outside the town and farms. The rescuers are trying their hardest. Attempting every method and idea to pinpoint where the boy went missing. Such as checking every home to see if he had gone home to rest. Then, when they had no other lead. An agricultural worker suggested checking the forest and the edges of any bank of water. All the rescuers agreed.

They split all the people in half to finish both tasks in half the time. Many hours passed, and both groups met up where they started.

The search empty-handed.

Seeing as everyone was feeling disheartened, one of the volunteer rescuers frustratedly shouted. “I don’t care! We search everywhere again. We aren’t going to abandon this kid like we were-”. Instantly, everyone shouts ya damn right. They start to prepare for their second tour to find this young boy. This time, the group decides to stay together as they search everywhere again. As time passed, there were no acceptable results. Little by little, the huge, motivated groups started to dwindle.

First. After checking every edge of the oceans, lakes and rivers. A handful of people felt as if there was only one option that could’ve happened at this point….


So, they gave up. By the time the group got to the forest and the icy mountain, to further their rescue tour. More than half of their numbers believed he was dead and decided to give up the search. Half the group felt hopeless. The other half felt optimistic because if he wasn’t in any of the previous locations. He must be in another, or so they thought. As the remaining group walks through the dark, and cold forest. It leads to an icy mountain that is below zero degrees on a warm day.

The remaining rescuers began to realize they might not find this boy at all. Until a few of the searchers spot something laying on the floor between the beginning of the mountain and the end of the forest. They cautiously walk towards this thing laying on the floor just looking up. As it’s nighttime, their vision is impaired.

They begin to realize that it’s actually the little boy they have spotted. As they approach the boy, they are relieved to see him intact. The boy didn’t seem fazed by the search teams shouts and celebration as they spent many hours looking for him. All he seemed to care about was the ominous dark night sky. They brought him back to the township. There was a big group of villagers, friends and more waiting. Just to see if he was in one piece and then ask him about his disappearance.

The boy easily and quickly shrugged it all off as if it didn’t happen. Once the boy got home, he immediately went to his room and fell asleep. The next morning, the boy woke up extremely early before everyone else. He was already done working by the time everyone awoke from their sleep. A couple of hours later, people started to prepare for the day ahead of them. A few hours later, everyone was working. Caring for their fields. When the boys’ close friends started to wonder if their friend had woken up from his sleep. After his odd disappearance. They checked his house. Surprisingly, he wasn’t there. His friends were shocked.

The kid known for being the king of laziness, got up before them. They quickly ran off to the boys usual work area. To their astonishment, the fields are completely done. Perfectly. Even better than before. Looking at the field, his two friends feel confused and anxious. Without a doubt, they take off to where they heard he had been found. They run as fast as they can, avoiding all trees and debris. As they are running, they start closing in on their friend, and see someone else with him.

Curious to see who the person might be. The two boys screamed the lost boys name, “Jesse! Jesse!”. As they began to come face-to-face with Jesse. In the blink of an eye, the lost boy Jesse, was alone yet again.

 As Jesse’s friends are looking for some sort of explanation. Looking desperately all around for the person they just saw, to ease their mind.  Jesse then yells “What the hell are you doin here?!” As Jesse’s friends explain they were worried. They wanted to see what interested their unmovable friend to wake up early and complete work. Before they were up and awake. At that very moment. The boys themselves became unable to speak or move as though they were being restrained. Barely able to breath. They see this unnaturally, huge, dark distorted beatle looking creature,. arise from the ground in between them both. But yet as if it was kneeling to Jesse. Unable to speak or move. They instantly get this feeling of life or death. Once the creature appeared between them. The creature perked up and spewed out “What shall I do with them my liege?”  

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